Low sat essay. Please help!

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<p>So I just got my score report for my otherwise okay Sat. Writing is my Achilles Heel - 1600 Cr M but an 8 essay.

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<p>The URL is of im(gur). </p>

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<p>Thanks a lot for your help guys :slight_smile: </p>