<p>Can you help me out? I have to turn this into my english teacher tomorrow. I plan to apply to a few highly selective schools… Just joined CC for some critiques… (Tulane, Vandy, Duke)</p>
<p>I can PM it to you… but need feedback before 7a.m tomorrow morning. </p>
<p>Thank sooo much!</p>
<p>*my
- this was written in 15 min.</p>