Macaulay Honors Essay

College Essays
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<p>Hey,
I just finished the first draft of one of my Macaulay Honors essays and I was wondering if someone could critique it. Its not really good because I just needed to start somewhere, so I would appreciate ideas on how to improve it overall. Please tell me if you could help.</p>

<p>This is the prompt: Write about your extracurricular pursuits. Why and how do you choose the activities you are involved in? How do your activities reflect your values and affect your school, community or the world?</p>

<p>Thanks</p>

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<p>you can message me the essay if you’d like, ill take a look</p>

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<p>Okay, thanks!</p>

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<p>I would be wary of letting other people see your essays, you may become the victim of plagiarism if you’re not careful. If you have any questions about Macaulay, however, I’m currently a freshman at city in Macaulay so I may be able to help. Just message me anytime.</p>