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<p>These were my teachers comments on my rhetorical analysis in class essay. </p>

<p>“You have a very good grasp of the text but the development of the argument lacks cohesion and fluency. At times, your point may have gotten lost in your own syntax.” </p>

<p>5/6 for score</p>

<p>What does this truly mean?</p>

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<p>You knew what you wanted to say, but you didn’t say it well.</p>