Sorry for the lengthy post. Information included here reflects what is on my Common App, not my entire life. I’m older, so I hope to get some constructive feedback. Thank you.
Demographics:
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Male
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International
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Independent school (ranked first in the region (a region within the country) when I was there; unsure now. Received government, institutional scholarships. Our area was originally a hilly/mountainous rural area filled with farming/grazing lands before being urbanized in recent years due to privatization)
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First generation to college*
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Lower-middle income (according to World Bank GNI); eligible for full aid at all schools who meet full financial need for international applicants
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Athlete*?
*potential hooks, *?unsure if this is something I want to/can continue in college
Intended Major(s):
In order of preference and availability of the field of study in the college or university I am applying to
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Materials Science/Materials Science and Engineering, and related majors
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Electrical and Computer Engineering/Electrical Engineering/Electrical Engineering and Computer Science, and related majors
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Engineering Physics/Engineering Science, and related majors
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Computational Science/Computational Science and Engineering, and related majors
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Applied Physics/Computational Physics/Physics/Physics and Philosophy, and related majors
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Applied Mathematics/Computational Mathematics/Mathematics/Mathematics and Philosophy, and related majors
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Econometrics/Economics/Mathematical Economics/Philosophy, Politics, and Economics/Political Economy, and related majors*
*secondary field
ACT/SAT/SAT II:
Most recent scores
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990 TSIA2.0 Mathematics
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981 TSIA2.0 English language arts and reading
Additional notes:
- Applying test-optional, test-waived.
UW/W GPA and Rank:
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Most recent coursework at US T5 (non-degree) in mechanics: A (3 credits), A (1 credit); electricity and magnetism: A- (3 credits), A (1 credit); writing in the sciences: A- (4 credits); and, economics: predicted A- to A (4 credits)
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90.87 percent out of 100.00 secondary school cumulative weighted GPA (no unweighted)
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Top 20%
Additional notes:
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Secondary school only offered a single curriculum. No anything.
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Strong upwards trajectory from freshman to junior year. Senior year grades dipped because of family bereavement, but senior year grades also in upwards trajectory.
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According to the copy of the school profile provided to me, I was in the top 10 of the hidden internal ranking system for our class. No student in our class got 95 percent and above. Less than 10 percent of the class got greater than 90 percent but less than 95 percent.
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Graduated early. Explanation in the space provided about how I was considerably younger than my peers and related contexts, including being selected to be placed in pilot programs (such as advanced and extended mathematics and statistics classes) to support accelerated academic development.
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I don’t know why I’m blabbing so much when my secondary school records are only used as historical context in my application as I am old (older Gen Z).
Awards:
List and sequence as it currently appears in the Common App
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Certificate of international recognition – science awards, awarded by a national (non-US) T5 university (post-graduate; international)
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Certificate of national recognition – science awards, awarded by a national (non-US) T5 university (post-graduate; national)
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Certificate of achievement – science awards, awarded by a global T5 medical school (post-graduate; international) (not as impressive as it may sound lol)
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Honor Roll (9, 10, 11, 12; school)
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Esprit de Corps awards (11, 12; school, state/regional, national)
Extracurriculars:
List and sequence as it currently appears in the Common App. Only quantified impacts and important context included below
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Family Responsibilities. Head of Household, Primary Carer. Coordinated 50+ medical appointments, 5 surgeries, and 10+ court proceedings. Managed household budget. Cared for elderly and younger relatives. (9, 10, 11, 12, post-graduate; all year)
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Community Service (Volunteer). Relief Strategy Analyst, Group Lead, Teacher. Directed USD 500M+ (equivalent currency in USD; equivalent to more than half of a minimum wage earner’s monthly pay) of COVID response aid, reaching 3M+ households. Sustained 10K+ scholarships. Tutored 52 low-income students to grade-level mastery. (9, 10, 11, 12, post-graduate; all year)
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Research. Computational/Quantitative Research Specialist, PI. Extended the funding of groups I was part of by 74%. Advanced 7 peer-reviewed publications with citations in Q1 international journals. (Post-graduate; all year)
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Academic. Reading Group Lead, Participant, Peer Mentor. Founded 2 and joined 7 reading groups in mathematics, physics, engineering, philosophy, linguistics, and economics. Mentored 43 peers into professional and graduate school admissions. (Post-graduate; all year)
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Foreign language. Linguistic Analyst (Written), Independent Learner. Translated 100+ texts with socioanthropological nuances and accuracy. (Post-graduate; all year)
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Dance. Corps de Ballet, Independent Learner. Ballet. (Post-graduate; all year)
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Music. Concertmaster, Soloist, Independent Learner. Performed in 3 recitals, 41 orchestals, and 8 solos for violin, cello, and voice. (9, 10, 11, 12, post-graduate; all year)
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Junior ROTC. Company Commander, Logistics (S4) Officer. Directed logistics for 44 cadets. Coordinated 70+ training operations. 3-peat champion in city and regional fancy and silent drills. (11, 12; all year)
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Athletics: JV/Varsity. Volleyball: Varsity Vice Captain, Setter/Middle Blocker. Led 100+ practices. Guided team to 5 city titles and multiple podium finishes. (9, 10, 11, 12, post-graduate; during school year, all year)
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Athletics: JV/Varsity. Swimming: Varsity Athlete, Back/Breast. Podium finishes in 12 relays. Contributed to 7 team city medals. (9, 10, 11, 12; during school year)
Additional notes:
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Family responsibilities take most hours per week and weeks per year.
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Awarded best research poster and best research presentation (first and corresponding author) at a national (non-US) T5 university science symposium (unsure if I should include this information, and where to, as all my sections are filled, including the Additional information subsection).
Essays/LORs/Other
Essays
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8 to 10 out of 10 Common App Personal Essay. One paragraph about mom’s death and what it meant. Rest of the essay weaves moments of my personal growth, obstacles and solutions, contributions and impact, what those experiences taught me, and what else can I contribute after those lessons.
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8 to 10 out of 10 Common App Additional Information. The Challenges and circumstances subsection provides clarifications about other hardships, what I did to overcome them, and what they taught me. It also briefly talked about my generational history of being “first”, which in my case is the first to apply to college. The Additional information subsection provides a numerical list of additional personal, educational, and environmental contexts, including contributions, changing circumstances, gaps and solutions, growing food, SAT test center and proper library being 5+ hours of commute each way, PIs remark of how I “saved the entire project”, etc. It also very briefly talked about a debilitating medical condition I experienced very recently.
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8 to 10 out of 10 college-specific writings.
Additional notes:
- External volunteer readers generally rated my writings 9 to 10 out of 10. They mentioned that my entire application goes back to one central theme (will not disclose here) while providing contexts about my experiences and growth from different lenses.
LORs
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8 to 10 out of 10 counselor evaluation. My secondary school evaluator is the school principal as we did not have a college or academic counselor. Based on what they showed me, they provided an exceptional letter and evaluation, with multiple anecdotes and superlatives about me, including a conversation they had with my late mom (which I did not know they had).
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Unknown English teacher evaluation. Recommender is a faculty member at two US T5 RUs. They did their PhD at a US T5 RU. Enthusiastically agreed to write me a letter. They were also quick to send the evaluation and recommendation (recommender invitation sent a month after they agreed to write a recommendation), so I would like to assume it is good. I performed well in class and peer conferences. I was also the only student who wrote an original research paper for the class; everyone else wrote a review paper. Unknown evaluation as they did not voluntarily show it to me.
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Unknown science (physics) teacher evaluation. Recommender is a faculty member at a US T5 LAC and was a faculty member at a US T5 RU. They did their PhD and postdoc at a US T5 RU. Also enthusiastically agreed to write me a letter. They sent in their evaluation and recommendation a few days after their fall semester classes ended. I would like to assume it is good because they promptly updated me when they submitted it and asked me to keep them posted about my future plans. Unknown evaluation as they did not voluntarily show it to me.
Other
Everything in the Responsibilities and circumstances subsection of the Common App Activities section applies and/or applied to me, except for Taking care of my own child or children.
Schools:
Additional notes:
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Only applying via regular decision rounds.
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Only applying to colleges and universities who meet full demonstrated need.
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The college or university itself needs to have strong civic engagement programs that support the continuation and expansion of my community work.
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The college, university, and/or its partners need to have current faculty and research in computational materials and/or topological band theory for semiconductor and/or energy storage materials.
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Already finished 14 applications. I can submit 6 more applications with the Common App fee waiver.