. I struggle with my thesis the most and my topic sentences . Please help me I am struggling. In my paper I have a few lyrics inputted in the essay but I dont think it is in the right format.
(MLA) WHAT I NEED HELP ON or cristism
- my thesis and intro
- need more sources
- everything needs to be in past tense
- I added little notes where i need help (: Also please let me know if my essay is strong and my thesis supports my body paragraph. I Will pm you my essay! Please comment if you want to help . Thanks