Mediocre student, quirky essay, may not be a good topic, looking for critique.

College Essays
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<p>Post here if interested, make sure I know you won’t plagiarize.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it hopelessness, I’ve already sent my applications in, so it would do me no good to plagiarize (I’m really happy with my own, so i wouldn’t copy it anyways)</p>