<p>I was just going through my Gap-Year Essay and I found that there were four minor grammatical errors in the last part of my essay (ok ok. those were major errors! Happy?). Moreover, I feel that the whole essay was fine, but the ending was damn sloppy (not coherent, could have been better, doesn’t makes much sense and not well-edited).</p>
<p>Can I use my Mid-Year Report to rewrite this essay (of course there are more updates to add and not just the essay)?</p>
<p>I will write at the top of the essay </p>
<p>“Sir, I request you to not to consider my gap year essay which I submitted earlier. Instead, consider the essay attached below. Thank you”.</p>
<p>PS: I took a year-off and I am not waiting for any other results/ exam scores update. I have already submitted all of my transcripts to all schools.</p>