Mind critiquing my CommonApp Essay?

<p>Please post if you would like to critique my essay. I will PM it to you.</p>

<p>Hello, I’m happy to read it & critique but be warned I’m pretty tough. When you PM it be sure to let me know which school or type of school you are applying…</p>

<p>I’d like to read and give some feedback!</p>

<p>i’ll read it. send it over</p>