<p>I’ve edited this essay so many times but cannot cut it down.</p>
<p>I need a third party to look at it from a fresh point of view and let me know what seems unnecessary.</p>
<p>I’m sending in stuff tomorrow! please help!</p>
<p>i promise you wont regret reading this! (ive come down to being desperate.)</p>
<p>PLEASE HELP!</p>
<p>I’ll take a look. PM me your essay + email address so I can send it back.</p>