<p>Would these mistakes greatly detract from my application?</p>
<p>“The most impactful part was the professor spent the time to answer my questions about the biology program.” –> “The most influential part was when the professor spent the time to answer my questions about the biology program.”</p>
<p>Mispelled Frederick Douglass (“Frederick Douglas”).</p>
<p>One instance of bad parallelism and a few passive voice mistakes.</p>