<p>I would like to get some critiques on this essay; I don’t know if it’s what they’re actually looking for when it’s about a “mistake” because it describes an incident and then questions whether or not that incident was really a mistake at all. Is that wrong–are they looking for people to admit failures and how they dealt with them?</p>
<p>Will send via PM/EMail. If you read my essay, I’ll read yours for sure.</p>
… :)</p>