<p>Can someone critique it for me?</p>
<p>Also, can someone tell me whether or not the topic is okay? </p>
<p>I was thinking of a few others, like my passion for art that spawned from Japanese culture and European Art, or my photography, which comes from my love of nature, but I felt both of these topics couldn’t be covered in 150 words or less…</p>
<p>My short answer actually stands at 148 words…and it’s about why I formed my Asian Pacific Culture Club and a few things we’ve done since I founded it.</p>