My attempt at humor in commonapp short responses

Applying to College
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<p>Can somebody read/critique my commonapp short responses (the 150 word one)?</p>

<p>I added in a joke and tried to make it funny, but I don’t know if I did a good job or not.</p>

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<p>pm itttttttttt</p>

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<p>sounds funny, lol</p>

<p>sure</p>

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<p>i’ll try. send it</p>

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<p>PMed. Thanks</p>

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<p>ill check it out/</p>

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<p>sure
pm me</p>

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<p>i’ll read it.
i wish i could write humor</p>

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<p>i’ll read it…i’ve been so far staying away from humor (not that i have none…) lol</p>

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<p>i want to read it</p>

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<p>send away .</p>

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<p>ill read it, im very curious!</p>

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<p>i’ll read, i’m always impressed when people can add humor… i stink at it!</p>

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<p>Thanks everybody, it’s sent</p>

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<p>send it 2 me 2</p>