<p>I gave it a shot in the other section, no luck. And all I really am concerned with is BC anyway,so</p>
<p>Black Male
3.7 GPA
2000 SAT (CR 690, M 670, W 640)
720 US History
720 Math I (yeah, probably one of my bigger mistakes)
Did pretty well in the competition for the PSAT scores in the African American circle thing, did decent in the reg (commendation I think).</p>
<p>Two high schools, probably had a 3.8 or 3.9 there
Ranked #1 in first high school, out of 200</p>
<p>Ranked 14th or so out of 400 in second high school.</p>
<p>AP/H
First school had zero options. I was on track for highest regents diploma easily, did accelerated classes (you just skip a year) for every possible class.
2cd
11 - APUSH, H Anat&Phys
12 - AP French V, AP Calc, AP phys, Honors Civics</p>
<p>EC’s
Varsity Swimming, Four years, captain. Our team smokes Conference, places at states top 10.
Club swimming, one year. National Y team.
These both total almost 25 hours a week. I always feel like my EC comes across as thin, but I really do put almost all of my free time into this. Between fund raising, training, and especially summer workouts, there are no hours left.</p>
<p>French club for two years
JV Baseball for two years</p>
<p>Employment
I’m a lifeguard and a swim lesson instructor year round, totaling about 35 hours a week in the summer and about ten during the school year.</p>
<p>Awards
NHS
Scholar athlete
Honor roll etc (changes names at different schools)</p>
<p>Essays were all pretty good, lots of editing and revising.
My GC rec was amazing (got to read it)
One teacher rec will be very good (didn’t get to read it, but students all but beg for her letters every year, she limits it to her top 15 or so students).</p>
<p>Possible Hooks: Athlete, URM, child of disabled war veteran, did two tours in Iraq, moved all over the country my entire life (6 states, 15 or so locations) all with consistent grades and activities.</p>