My Columbia Essay: Can anyone please peruse it?

Colleges & Universities Columbia University
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<p>Hi!</p>

<p>I am a prospective transfer applicant to CC from a small lac. My essay has exceeded the 1500 character limit. It’s 1724 characters long. Can you please read it for me and advise me on how I can improve it?</p>

<p>I will respond to anyone of your threads as well.</p>

<p>Thanks.</p>

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<p>sure (:</p>

<p>(i’m an RD applicant.)</p>

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<p>I’ll read it. =] class of 2013 so no worries =P</p>

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<p>any accepted student?</p>

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<p>I’ll read it. I got a likely from Columbia last week :)</p>

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<p>Sure, why not! :)</p>