My commonapp essay on a trip and experience that has impacted me

<p>Is anybody interested in reading it?</p>

<p>I’d be happy to read it - Just PM me :)</p>

<p>yup. Message it to me.</p>

<p>i will help</p>

<p>I’ll read it, but send it to me only if you’re willing to. </p>

<p>I have to tell you in advance that I’m a fellow applicant to Yale '14.</p>

<p>Sure, I’d love to help. </p>

<p>Please, please include the prompts.</p>

<p>i’ll read it! (only if you’re comfortable sending it to a 2014 hopeful, though)</p>

<p>sure - pm me, I do alot of editing so I’d be happy to help.</p>

<p>Sure - I am also a 2014 hopeful if that is OK with you</p>