My CommonApp essay

<p>Hello all.
My name is Anirudh Krishna and I’m from India. I am applying to colleges abroad in the USA. Some colleges, as you already know, require the Common Application. I would like to request someone to read my essay. I shall mail my essay to whoever wants to do so. Please tell me how I well I have written it and how I can improve it.</p>

<p>Anirudh Krishna</p>

<p>pm it over</p>

<p>pm it to me</p>

<p>you can pm me it, if you want</p>

<p>you can pm it to me</p>

<p>I’ll read if you’d like</p>

<p>I can read it as well.</p>

<p>go go go gogo</p>

<p>ill read it</p>

<p>ill read it if you want</p>

<p>pm it to me</p>

<p>Thank you. I hope you don’t find it offensive, but I am only sending my essay to users with a high post count. I’m sure you understand. I don’t know over the internet which on of you is an ‘e-thug’.</p>

<p>If no one else has said this to you, you should not post your name or any other information that would allow someone to identify you.</p>

<p>I didn’t know that. I’ll follow suit from now on, but really - what could possibly happen? It’s just my name on a forum,</p>

<p>i just found this site and would love to read your essay</p>

<p>I can help. PM me if you want suggestions!</p>

<p>I’ll read it.</p>

<p>ill read it too!</p>