my english essay... help :(

College Essays
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<p>Hello u guys…
this is not about college essay, but i have a reli important essay due nxt week :S
this is about Song of SOlomon, which im sure u guys all know :slight_smile:
the topic is: </p>

<p>Compare and contrast the three types of women in Song of Solomon and the worlds they inhabit</p>

<p>the following is my intro…pls correct or give me suggestions:S caz im SO blank about wut i should rite…do you think this intro is clear enough?
thanks so much!</p>

<p>In Song of Solomon, a magical realism novel written by Toni Morrison, gender inequality ubiquitously appears through different female characters which also reveals the diverse and changing society during the 1930s. Morrison introduces and describes three types of women, including the typical submissive woman at home, the independent but a social outcast, and the indulgent and weak girl. Unlike other novels that demonstrate a stereotypical woman figure, Song of Solomon reveals the changing image and role of women due to the change in society. Yet, even though women learn to adjust themselves and devote their love to live up men and the society’s expectations, they can’t escape the destiny of getting abandoned. Thus, while analyzing the mass difference between the female characters in the changing society, the novel also reveals the general similarity of all women’s devotion and men’s abandonment.</p>

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<p>can anyone help :(?</p>

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<p>Is the last sentence your thesis, because, if so, I would rearrange the paragraph. Here’s the changes I would make:</p>

<p>In Song of Solomon, a magical realism novel written by Toni Morrison, gender inequality ubiquitously appears through different female characters which also reveals the diverse and changing society during the 1930s. Even though women learn to adjust themselves and devote their love to live up men and the society’s expectations, they can’t escape the destiny of getting abandoned. Thus, while analyzing the mass difference between the female characters in the changing society, the novel also reveals the general similarity of all women’s devotion and men’s abandonment. Unlike other novels that demonstrate a stereotypical woman figure, Song of Solomon reveals the changing image and role of women due to the change in society. Morrison introduces and describes three types of women, including the typical submissive woman at home, the independent but a social outcast, and the indulgent and weak girl. </p>

<p>I thought that the sentence that answered the compare and contrast question best was the one that described the women, though you may want to elaborate more.</p>

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<p>Oh, I thought you were talking about the book in the Bible…lol</p>