My English teacher loved my essay but I need harsh critics!!!!

<p>Its a common app anyone willing to read and make edits before its due tomorrow?</p>

<p>I’ll critique yours if you critique mine</p>

<p>sure pm me! But I’m not much of a grammar guy so I’ll comment on the idea or anything I see wrong/can be improved</p>

<p>PM me. But I am applying to common app schools, so dont send it if you arent comfortable</p>

<p>Sure! PM me i already sent mine in so no worries about copying</p>

<p>i’ll critique</p>

<p>:P I’ll destroy it…</p>

<p>If you want me to. Lol</p>

<p>Thanks to those who’ve read!</p>

<p>i’ll read if you’ll read mine???</p>

<p>sure just PM me if ur still up</p>