My essay currently is just a pity party...

<p>and I want to change that.</p>

<p>My essay is all about how I was bullied as a kid and how I became interested in biology but it’s so unoriginal and pity-ish. >_></p>

<p>I basically need to rewrite my entire essay… .___.</p>

<p>I would love for anyone to edit it, but also for any ideas to start over :x</p>

<p>Sounds as though you’ve answered your own question… rewrite it!</p>