My essay needs help!

[leo187um]

<p>Help critique my essay please!!!</p>

[TheOneCurlyFry]

<p>okay. i will.</p>

[liangshengtm]

<p>and count me in</p>

[DimitarM]

<p>me too (i’ll read it if it’s interesting :))</p>

[extemporaneous]

<p>me three…</p>