My essay on another essay

<p>I have already wrote and sent an essay to all of my colleges except Columbia. When I started to shorten my other essay since Columbia specifically says for it to be under 500 words, I realized that I hated my other essay because it was completely false. I wrote my Columbia essay about why the previous one was false. This is definitely a rough draft since I just started and finished it in the past 20 minutes, but I was wondering if some people would take it a look and see whether it is a good idea and give me some advice. Thanks!</p>

<p>I’ll take a look.</p>

<p>ill read it PM it to me.</p>

<p>I think as long as your new essay reveals as much, or more than what the previous essay could muster, you will be okay. PM me your essay.</p>

<p>Send it over.</p>

<p>I’d love to help out! ^^</p>