My essay. Please give me your input!

College Essays
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<p>Hey, so I have been working on my essay for a while. I have got it to sort of where I want it. Does a good job of what I feel is portraying reverse oppression? You tell me what it is. Anyway its my common app essay for Penn, BC, and UVA so it needs to be amazing. </p>

<p>As of now its 750 words and I think, correct me if im wrong, it should be more around 500 words for the sake of the admissions peeps. Any advice or input would be much appreciated because this essay will make or break me!</p>

<p>Any interest and I will PM it to you. THANKS!</p>

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<p>i’ll give it a read if you’d like. pm me.</p>

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<p>i can read it but i would say cut the words down from 750 to the 450-550 range.</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look at it</p>