<p>My UC prompt 1 statement sounds simple, but I used a lot of I and I did not do a lot of describing, at least I do not think I did.
Critique is appreciated.
Tell me if you hate it or love it.
Thanks.
I’ll pm you.
P.S I wrote about my world, but it is
sounding like I wrote about my imagination, which better fits prompt 2.
Can someone tell me that as well when they read it?</p>
<p>I’ll read it. I’m a harsh critic tho.</p>
<p>I need harsh criticism. I do not mind. If it is boring or unrelated to the prompt let me know. I have time to revise it so it does not bother me.</p>
<p>I’ll read it if you want.</p>
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<p>Alright thanks, Remember if it sucks tell me, but also give me ways to fix it.
The deadline is in two weeks. I need it to.be good as soon as possible.</p>
<p>Alright. I will try to give you a feedback by tomorrow.</p>
<p>I’ll read it. I’m a better editor than a writer :-)</p>
<p>I’ll read it, my too-complicated writing style might help with your “simple” essays.</p>
<p>I’ll read and proofread it.</p>
<p>I personally don’t like it… It lacks focus.</p>
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<p>I wrote a totally different essay now.</p>