My First College Essay

<p>Alright so I’m really conflicted with this essay. My AP Lit teacher read it and told me it was horrible, my friend read it and thought it was pretty well written. Anyone else wanna offer their opinion?</p>

<p>i will read it…</p>

<p>Bump anyone? Please?</p>

<p>I’ll read it. PM it to me.</p>

<p>I’ll read it too</p>

<p>I’ll take a look.</p>