My first draft! - Hidden Siezures Shake a Family

College Essays
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<p>Anyone wanna take a quick look at my first draft?</p>

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<p>Please PM your essay, and a prompt if needed.</p>

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<p>Yea sure…will be an honest critique</p>

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<p>I’ll gladly look at it.</p>

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<p>PM it over!</p>

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<p>Thanks! Anyone else able to give me some honest feedback?</p>

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<p>sure. send me the prompt as well</p>

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<p>Thanks! I would love to keep getting more!! This is just my first draft so i just need a light edit.</p>

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<p>I will read it, PM it.</p>

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<p>PM here, I’ll read it.</p>

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<p>I’ll critique it, PM it over :)</p>

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<p>Thanks everyone! I sent it to you guys but havent got any feedback yet!</p>

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<p>Finished draft 2. Bump</p>

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<p>Bump. will anyone look? Im beginning to think that even the high post count members I sent it to arent even going to try to help, just steal ideas.</p>

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<p>I’ll send you my thoughts soon. But to your last post, there isn’t an idea to steal…</p>

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<p>Thanks Raceme! And sorry if my post came off as harsh or something. I got a little worried when I looked at some of the people who replieds post history and saw that all of their posts were in the essay section, asking people to send them some essays. So yea, I was not worried about you raceme. And thanks once again!</p>