My first shot at my CommonApps Essay

College Essays
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<p>First of all, is this the right place to post this thread?
Second, can any of you CC’ers please give feedback on my Essay? Any help would be greatly appreciated :slight_smile: Thank you!</p>

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<p>Sure, send me a PM. ;)</p>

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<p>Sure PM it to me</p>

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<p>i’ll read it :)</p>

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<p>i’ll read it also. PM me! :)</p>

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<p>send it over</p>

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<p>you can pm in to me!There’s absolutely no chance of my essay having anything in common with yours so dont worry :)</p>

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<p>If you are international, sure.
I think I can help you out with that.</p>

<p>I can send my commonapp essay in exchange, right?</p>

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<p>OMG I am so sorry. Due to my laziness, I replied to this thread after a couple of days, while I could have PM’d earlier. Sorry for the delay. I’ll send y’all PM’s of my essay.</p>

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<p>i can read it if ur still interested :)</p>

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<p>I can take a loook!</p>

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<p>If you still are interested, I would love to read it if you PM your essay to me.</p>

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<p>If you still need a head, I’m interested.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it if you want…</p>

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<p>Ill take a look. The more the merrier lmao</p>

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<p>PM it to me!</p>

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<p>I’ll take a PM</p>

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<p>I would like to read it as well</p>

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<p>i’d like to read it!</p>

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<p>I shall reads it</p>