<p>I made the gutsy move of trashing my common app essay in exchange for a new one. It’s still kind of choppy, but I feel like it’s a lot better than what I had before. Would anyone care to look over it?</p>
<p>I’ll look over it!</p>
<p>I made the gutsy move of trashing my common app essay in exchange for a new one. It’s still kind of choppy, but I feel like it’s a lot better than what I had before. Would anyone care to look over it?</p>
<p>I’ll look over it!</p>