My Personal Essay

<p>HEY!</p>

<p>I’m applying to Penn ED and was hoping if a few people can read over my essay. No family members or friends can read over my essay since none of them know the secret I am talking about in my essay.The anonymity of CC is great for me. </p>

<p>This is not my real account, but I had to make a new one since I have real life friends on this website. </p>

<p>If two people would be willing to read my essay and help with the grammar and structure that would be great. I don’t want to be sending this out to a lot of people so I’m going to be selective (I will look at your past threads/post etc.). I’m really depending on CC! Thanks a lot!</p>

<p>I’ll read it over.</p>

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<p>You posted that in a different thread and you just joined. Sorry, but I’d prefer someone experienced.</p>

<p>I don’t want to be chastised for being selective! It’s a personal essay and I don’t want people stealing any ideas. A more respected member from the forum, someone who has been here for a long time, a high school graduate are the ideal reviewers! Thanks</p>

<p>I will do my best to give you someone elses point of view</p>

<p>Haha I can understand your selection criteria, if I am worthy enough then I’d like to help!</p>

<p>I’m willing to help. Although if you don’t find me credible don’t quote me; just don’t message me.</p>

<p>I’d like to take a look as well. :slight_smile: Granted my amount of posts probably don’t suffice with your criteria, but who knows. I understand your privacy, and I would keep it at that. Just like meadow, if you don’t find me credible- please don’t quote me; just don’t message me. (Sorry for the redundancy)</p>

<p>I won’t mind taking a look even though I don’t really post critics publicly…</p>

<p>I’ll give it a read.</p>

<p>I’ll read it. But I am applying to schools this year, so I guess you’ll just have to trust that I have my own essay ideas and won’t steal yours. If you don’t like that idea, that’s fine–just don’t send it to me.</p>

<p>Feel free to PM me, as I can take a look at your essay and give some suggestions. (I’m transferring to Brown, if that means anything.)</p>

<p>I’ll read it. I’m the editor in chief of my school’s newspaper and literary magazine.</p>

<p>I’ll read it if you want, I’m going to college in the fall.</p>