My personal statement for Ivies... need input.

College Essays
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<p>Hello,</p>

<p>I am asking if anyone is willing to take a look at my personal statement. What I need now are grammar freaks, for my content is good. If you can spare a few minutes of your day, please help me and if you want, I can help you too. I’m actually looking for those who actually do want to help out, instead of ripping it off to get ideas. I’ll write down who I send it to, and I sincerely await your reply back.</p>

<p>Thanks,
azsxdc</p>

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<p>I can read it. PM me:)</p>

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<p>I’m a complete grammar freak. I’m REALLY particular about it. PM me!</p>

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<p>We’re all in the same boat so If you trust me, I’m your man. I hope if and when I finish with yours you could take a look at mine?</p>

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<p>i can read it.</p>

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<p>me too. pm me</p>

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<p>I’ll help critique if you need additional responses. PM if need be.</p>

<p>33/36 ACT, 4/5 in AP Language Composition</p>

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<p>i can read it.</p>

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<p>I’ll give you an eye. (hehe, instead of I’ll give you a hand, ha ha …ha - yeah, not very funny, I know :P)</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look.</p>

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<p>i’ll take a look too. PM me</p>

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<p>i would love to critique it. PM me and i’ll take a look at it</p>

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<p>Sure, I’ll give it a look. I’ll try to be honest, PM me.</p>

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<p>I wanna check PM me</p>

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<p>Sure I’ll look</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look and critique it for you! Just PM me</p>

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<p>ill take a look, pm me</p>