<p>Which is why I’m asking if anyone with a kind heart and a giving soul can read my essay and add some suggestions in…</p>
<p>I thank each and every one of you greatly :)</p>
<p>I wouldn’t mind - just pm me and tell me why you think it’s so bad. It’s probably not as bad as you think haha XD</p>
<p>yeah, same here. Insomnia sucks, so I rather spend my time awake helping someone :)</p>
<p>Thank you so much! Both of you :)</p>
<p>Should I just PM you guys my essay so you can check it out? :)</p>