<p>Here is my essay about a discovery that has importance to you...</p>
<p>There have been many discoveries and technical advancements throughout human history; the discovery of magnetism, utilization of mathematics, the understanding of the mechanics of gravity and the harnessing the power of the atom. With all these pivotal discoveries and huge technological advancements, there have been many that have been overlooked, such as The Potato.</p>
<p>Since I was a child, I have always been interested in topics that kids and even adults would find inexorably boring and absurd. My parents were at one time concerned at my unorthodox interest. At one time, I remember myself enraged when my dad decided to turn the channel when I was glued to the TV watching a documentary on OPB about crabs. I recall myself when I was 8 running around my backyard chasing and collecting bugs. Ants were my favorite, as I would create mini ant farms. While bugs and crabs interest me still to this day, the potato caught my attention. </p>
<p>I am amazed at the various functions a potato can perform. It is arguably one of the most versatile food product out there. Unlike other foodstuffs, the potato comes in various names and has influenced slang. Some examples are tuber, spud and the infamous couch potato. Whenever potato comes into someones mind, they immediately think food! My friends, the potato is much more! It has been symbolized in toys such as Mr. Potato Head. It can be used as a projectile in spud guns and potato cannons. This food product has also been filmed in feature films such as Toy Story. The potato has also influenced our culture in some ways as well such as the highly controversial French fry (Or freedom fry, whatever makes people happy) and potato chip. </p>
<p>The potato did not inspire me to pursue my goals, spark my perceptiveness or inspire me in any way. I didnt dig that deep when preoccupied with this. What it did though is make me aware of my unique interest in science and in history. It all started when I was about to cook some clam chowder when on the TV I saw a documentary on the history about food, mostly concerning potatoes. It covered its significance in Ireland, development in American culture and eats. While watching this documentary, my sister came in looking at my face shaking her head saying something around the lines of, Your nuts, your watching a documentary about food! She left the room in disbelief. That got me to realize, I actually find a documentary about food products interesting when others would turn the channel and watch people eat bugs. Before that, I never gave much thought about my unique sense of interest and its contribution to my personality.</p>
<p>Most people see some trivial object and immediately think the superficial. When people see a computer, they simply see a monitor, a tower and some cables without even thinking twice on how it works or its significance in human development. I have wanted to know how things work and explore ideas. I have been known as being observant; always willing to learn and listen which has helped build my creativeness and my ability imagine. Both are key characteristics of my personality.
<p>A few questions
1) The essay is suppose to put at least a simle on you face. Did you smile ?:)
2) Note any writing convention errors
3) Do you like the essay and do you think the admission officers will?
4) Does the essay work?</p>