<p>Hi, would anyone like to read and give constructive criticism on my common app essay, which I will likely be using to apply ED to Cornell?
It’s somewhat risky, and about religious topics. If you are very religious and touchy on the subject, then please do not ask to read it. I don’t want to be insulted or lectured by people who disagree with my opinions.
Only users with over 100 posts, sorry I have to be careful.</p>
<p>Here’s my application profile if you want to tell me my chances at Cornell.</p>
<p>I’m a chinese american student who is a wellrounded hardworker who is also relaxed and funny most of the time and serious when I need to be.</p>
<p>Small, private Catholic school outside of Boston, somewhat competitive
Rank #3 / around 180</p>
<p>Freshman - All honors, 95 avg
Sophomore - All honors and AP Euro, 93 avg
Junior - All honors and AP USH, 93 avg
Senior - AP Calc BC, AP Chem, AP Phys, AP Eng, and theology</p>
<p>SAT I -
March - CR 680, M 650, WR 730
June - CR 790, M 690, WR 680
Oct - don’t know yet, definitely above 700 in math
Combined, 790, 690, 730
2210 or 1480/1600</p>
<p>SAT II
Nov - will take chemistry and math II</p>
<p>ACT -
31 composite, wont be taking again</p>
<p>Extracurriculars -
Newspaper editorial editor
Model UN Under Secretary General
Amnesty International Core Leadership
Model Congress
Multi-cultural club
volunteer work at food pantry and museum of science in boston
Big Brothers/Big Sisters
National Honor Society</p>
<p>Other colleges I’m applying to for RD if I don’t get into Cornell are CMU, Columbia, Brown, Harvard, Tufts, Vassar, Northwestern, Emory, USC, + or -</p>
<p>I’d love to read it. Email me at because.of.kirk@gmail com (as a Word file please)</p>
<p>i know that i only have 50 posts, but i would love to read your essay because i am writing about religion also. (dont worry i already submitted my applications)</p>
<p>I would love to read it. My e-mail is <a href="mailto:teddys@gmail.com">teddys@gmail.com</a></p>
<p>my email is <a href="mailto:darkmage135■■■■■■■■■■■■">darkmage135■■■■■■■■■■■■</a></p>
<p>I will read it. Evaluate it honestly.</p>
<p>That sounds really interesting, I’d love to read it.</p>
<p>hey, yeah I live in Brookline, ma. your GPA seems a lot better than mine. How have you done on your APs?
like you I am also applying to Northwestern, CMU, tufts.</p>
<p>my email is <a href="mailto:elinkov@gmail.com">elinkov@gmail.com</a>, by the way.</p>
<p>hmm send it if you want over PM</p>
<p>I’d like to help. If you read my comments on others, and if you think useful, PM me.</p>
<p>Hi there!</p>
<p>I currently work in my university’s admission department. Although I don’t have a say in the admission decision, I know how they operate and could give you an honest opinion if your essay works or not. I wouldn’t mind reading it and proofing it either. Please email it to <a href="mailto:marc.d.tan@gmail.com">marc.d.tan@gmail.com</a>. I look forward to reading your essay!</p>
<p>Sounds very interesting. I would be glad to help. PM me if you want.</p>
<p>Ill read it for you PM me</p>