<p>a lot of ppl complain about how the grammar sucks and they hardly teach that stuff in school. however it actually isn’t that hard to break 700. i think the essay is the easiest way to boost your score. when i took the SAT i got a 650 in grammar and a 12 on the essay. the last time i took it i had an 8 on the essay. the tests were about 5 months in between and i know i didn’t improve my writing by much.
the trick i discovered was that you have to be clear about your topic and relate back to it in the conclusion. personally when i reviewed my essay online, i thought my 2 major points/paragrahs sounded like crap and cheap info i made up. bascially my supporting statements were very broad and straightforward. however my intro was pretty good because i managed to draw something very small (ex. my first encounter with a dishwasher or a dog) into something that had a tremendous impact on my life. it was almost funny in that i made a trivial occurence into a powerful experience. then i applied it into current events (notice how my main points becomes more pervasive) then in my conclusion i jumped right back into the real old me. i think as long as you deliver a powerful intro the reader will know it’ll be a good read, and also a powerful conclusion will basically fix a lot of the problems in the body. it should get anyone at least a 10.</p>
<p>if you don’t mind can you pm me the essay</p>