My sweet essay! (CC plz!)

<p>So I decided to chose the “topic of my own” section in the common application and I finished my essay but I’m still not quite sure about it. Which is why I need some constructive crituiqe(sp?) on it. I sort of chose a weird topic but it was the only paper that came naturally to me (if that’s how you can describe it :stuck_out_tongue: ). </p>

<p>No 08’ers please. Sorry, I’m just terribly paranoid.</p>

<p>Come on, anyone?</p>

<p>send it over…i’ll gladly help you out
PM me :)</p>

<p>Ill help you out.</p>