My unbelieveable experience essay!! Edit anyone?

College Essays
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<p>Here’s my UC Pompt #2 essay. Tell me what you guys think!</p>

<p>I’ll PM it to you if you wanna ready it. Thanks! </p>

<p>Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud and how does it relate to the person you are?</p>

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<p>i’ll read it. pm it over.</p>

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<p>ill read it too PM me :)</p>

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<p>same here! pm!</p>

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<p>Send it on over and Ill give you some feedback</p>

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<p>PM it over, sir. :)</p>

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<p>Send it to me :)</p>

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<p>i will trade commentary? :smiley: email me, <a href="mailto:tyac.sg@gmail.com">tyac.sg@gmail.com</a></p>

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<p>Sure…PM it to me!</p>

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<p>Will be glad to take a look and give feedback. Send it over :)</p>