Need a little advice on ending paragraph of my essay

<p>So I've written the essay and everything, but I'm unsure as to whether to tack on this extra (I say paragraph but it's not exactly a paragraph) paragraph at the end. It's difficult to explain, but I also don't want to copy and paste it here: would someone mind it if I PMed them it?</p>

<p>I'd also really appreciate any comments on the essay as a whole!</p>

<p>Muchos gracias.</p>

<p>I’d love to read and provide my comments. </p>

<p>Though I am not an expert so its your wish if you want to send it or not!</p>

<p>Muchas** gracias but that’s not my point. I would love to help if you still need advice!</p>