Need a reader for Princeton supplement - significant person

<p>I wrote this essay but I’m not really sure if it’s that good and if I should use it. My commonapp essay is basically a significant experience so I may just use that on the princeton supplement and use something else for commonapp.</p>

<p>Could someone read the essay I have for significant person so far and let me know if it’s worth pursuing or if I should just scrap it? Thanks.</p>

<p>No '14ers.</p>

<p>I’ll take a look.</p>

<p>i’ll critique it</p>

<p>do you want to swap commonapp essays?</p>