Need advice for final version of common app essay.

<p>Hi! I have finalized my common app essay and was wondering if anyone could give me some pointers, especially the ending. Thanks!</p>

<p>I'll read it! PM me!</p>

<p>Sent! Thanks!</p>

<p>bump</p>

<p>10char</p>

<p>I will take a look :) PM me</p>