Need advice on my essay(s).

<p>I’m East African and in my 1st year of university (Law school) in East Africa but applying as a freshman because the colleges I contacted said I have to as my courses will not transfer.</p>

<p>So I need opinions on my essays.</p>

<p>Thanks.</p>

<p>In the event that you’ve written it, feel free to PM. I’m done with my essays. Mostly.</p>

<p>@Chlormel,
Well, What are you now planning to major in???</p>

<p>^^^And BTW I’ve seen ur essays…And I’ll mail you soon…Just wanna match ur intended major with ur writing…</p>

<p>Um…Geology.</p>