Need Advice/Opinions on CommonApp essay!

<p>I wrote it on my experience beating my rival school at the Georgetown University History Bowl, which led me to decide on what I wanted to do for the rest of my life. If anyone wants to read it and give me thoughts. lemme know!</p>

<p>sounds interesting. I'll take a look</p>

<p>PM me and I will give you some feedback</p>

<p>Pm me. Ill give feedback!</p>

<p>PM me! i'd be happy to give you feedback</p>

<p>sure i'd be glad to help you out!</p>

<p>sure i'll read if you still need an opinion</p>