need common app essay read (less than 500 words)

<p>Will someone who is done with apps or in college read my essay cuz I don’t want to risk someone stealing it or anything. The prompt was for me to discuss a local, personal, or national concern and its importance to me. It’s kind of short so I’m nervous.</p>

<p>Bump it up.</p>

<p>i will (: PM</p>