Need constructive criticism on an essay, due tomorrow!

College Essays
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<p>Describe an event, achievement, or experience of which you are particularly proud but that will not show up on a resume, may not garner any recognition, and does not appear anywhere else on your admission application.</p>

<p>Would anyone be willing to look mine over? If you do I’ll surely be willing to read over one of your essays for you!</p>

2

<p>Let’s swap essays, PM me.</p>

3

<p>let’s swap too</p>

4

<p>i’ll read it</p>

5

<p>I’m up for a swap. I’d prefer email (<a href="mailto:cwild2458@gmail.com">cwild2458@gmail.com</a>) to PM, but whichever floats your boat.</p>