<p>Hi all, I just finished writing my first draft which supposedly contains many grammatical error since I am an international student. Would someone please help critiquing my essays??? My deadline is pretty soon… Thank you in advance!</p>
<p>This is my intro of my essays. </p>
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<li><p>“Evaluate the significant event…”
Traitor. The word echoed in the entire room. The soundless world continued to flow. Minutes seemed like days, as time stood still. It was not the first time I was told but countless if I include the word directed to anyone. It was my mother who was saying. Since then, I have been wearing the mask of impervious eyes.</p></li>
<li><p>Personal statement/Motivation letter
Please prepare a statement regarding your motivation for study at — and your study and career plans. Through this statement we hope to get to know you better as a student and as a person. </p>
<pre><code> My teacher once said, You two would be a perfect person if you compensate for each others shortcoming. The words were always comforting as my heart somehow tickled. It may be sound bizarre but I was rather content than accepting my imperfection. With my mouth closed, people would realize that we are identical twins. This status of being a twin has been a major obstacle to my communication skills. Through the experiences I had alone in the United States established the indispensable confident in communicating with others.
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<p>My interest in communication began as such. The interest turned into my desire to learn the depth of it and has led to the continuous</p></li>
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