Need critique/revision help on a creative essay. Help!

<p>Creative prompt + essay. If you can help, it’d be really appreciated.</p>

<p>If it is interesting, PM it to me</p>

<p>send it over! wanna read mine too?</p>

<p>you can pm it to me too!, make sure u tell me what the prompt is though</p>

<p>Oh, and this prompt was for Chicago. I made it up myself, polkadots.</p>

<p>bump, anyone else?</p>

<p>i’m a harsh editor, pm me if you don’t mind</p>