Need Essay Critique

College Essays
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<p>I’m hoping to transfer from Community College to a really good school (I’m looking at Stanford, Johns Hopkins, Brown, and Washington University in St. Louis). This particular essay is tailored to my first choice school, WUSTL, but I plan to tweak it slightly for the other schools.</p>

<p>Please comment if you can help.</p>

<p>Thanks.</p>

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<p>Message me it and I’ll read</p>

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<p>I can’t because you don’t have enough posts yet. :(</p>

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<p>message me and can you do the same with mine when it’s done? :)</p>