Need feedback on Common App essay

<p>Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on you.
PM me, i need help</p>

<p>bump pm and ill send</p>

<p>Hey Ill help you. PM me your essay. Do you think you could look at mine as well, please? :)</p>

<p>I'll read it. Pm it to me.</p>