<p>Hey there ,
i wanna apply to UCB , i’m an international student and my English is not very good
but o would appreciate your feedback
Thanks!</p>
<p>Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud, and how does it relate to the person you are?</p>
<p>In high school many students cannot strike the right balance between academic work and community service . They focus all their attention on getting good grades , whilst that is surely important , what I have experienced the past three years , I could never have acquired within the scope of high school .
Throughout my time at in high school , I volunteered for a variety of NGOs as much as I could . though , it was during my senior year , just before my graduation , that I started to think about opening my own NGO . I felt as if I had developed many of the skills ,both personal and professional , required to play an effective role in the community . </p>
<p>At the beginning I was in the face of negativity and doubt from whomever I proposed the idea to in regards to how old I was and the sheer responsibility . With the help of my friends and family and the hard work I had put into it , “Tripoli good “ was up and running . TG is an NGO of 120 members that caters to the needs of unprivileged kids and teenagers who are deprived the basic right of an adequate education , being this big an organization meant I had to hone my communication skills and make sure we were all working towards the same goal . </p>
<p>As a co-founder I was involved in almost all of the projects , large and small .from painting school walls to raising an astonishing $70,000 in a month through intensive media campaigning which took a lot of effort and determination . although accumulating this immense amounts of money is in itself incredible , what was of greater importance to me was sending around 300 children to school using the money to buy a year’s school supply . it was an accomplishment that I am highly proud of as well as it succeeding in being one of the largest contributions to my community . </p>
<p>This experience has assured more than ever that education is absolutely vital . it also taught me to be grateful for what I have , which is more than many other less lucky people . most importantly though , it brought out qualities I had never thought I had in me . and it just makes ponder , if a pretensions little kiddo was able to achieve that , what is a university student capable of? . </p>