Need final readers before submitting to HYPS

<p>who wants to read it</p>

<p>I’ll critique it</p>

<p>I’ll read it.</p>

<p>I can critique it if you still need feedback.</p>

<p>I’d LIKE to read it; I’ve recently developed a craving for good college app essays, and I’m sure yours is brimming with amazingness. Yes, send it, please? :)</p>

<p>i’ll critique it</p>